" Bold Smiles and Wisecracks Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Drinking and dreaming
critical abilities
matter-of-factly
II
Went down easily
with guileless simplicity
equally lively
III
Eccentricities
wider visibility
destruct and rebuild
IV
Fingertips and palms
rather than sticks and mallets
multi-talented
V
Tearing up downtown
juicy-sounding novelties
sharp-tongued comedies
VI
Flashy fantasies
escapist entertainment
bold smiles and wisecracks...
Tuesday, June 19, 2012
Saturday, June 16, 2012
Far Flung Haiku
" Far Flung Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Terrifying scenes
shielded by ambivalence
straight jacket escape
II
Unattainable
deadpan, bizarre repartees
making good neighbors
III
Absurdist chambers
potent laugh lines, few and far
extracting humor
IV
Sort of redundant
paranoia and shot guns
ringing out, far flung...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Terrifying scenes
shielded by ambivalence
straight jacket escape
II
Unattainable
deadpan, bizarre repartees
making good neighbors
III
Absurdist chambers
potent laugh lines, few and far
extracting humor
IV
Sort of redundant
paranoia and shot guns
ringing out, far flung...
Wednesday, June 13, 2012
Orogenies Haiku
" Orogenies Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Valleys and ridges
correlations in phases
like edges of old
II
Paleozoic
Blue Ridge and inner Piedmont
seamed orogenies
III
Meta-sediments
intrusively igneous
oceans beginning
IV
Folding and faulting
supercontinent's remnants
later colliding
V
Down-faulted, normal
metamorphosed schist and gneiss
stresses subsided...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Valleys and ridges
correlations in phases
like edges of old
II
Paleozoic
Blue Ridge and inner Piedmont
seamed orogenies
III
Meta-sediments
intrusively igneous
oceans beginning
IV
Folding and faulting
supercontinent's remnants
later colliding
V
Down-faulted, normal
metamorphosed schist and gneiss
stresses subsided...
Saturday, June 9, 2012
Shiner Haiku
" Shiner Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Silvery to blue
knocking sounds and purring noise
swims with fins erect
II
Currents over sand
clear to turbid, small to large
pectoral fin rays
III
Moderately forked
in northwest territories
feeding on insects
IV
Leap a few inches
capture insects just above
a prolonged hover
V
Small rivers, clear creeks
considered a subspecies
berry-red lips, cheeks...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Silvery to blue
knocking sounds and purring noise
swims with fins erect
II
Currents over sand
clear to turbid, small to large
pectoral fin rays
III
Moderately forked
in northwest territories
feeding on insects
IV
Leap a few inches
capture insects just above
a prolonged hover
V
Small rivers, clear creeks
considered a subspecies
berry-red lips, cheeks...
Friday, June 8, 2012
Ridged Sawback Haiku
" Ridged Sawback Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván, Mom
& Mom-Mom Suzán
for Rebecca, Russ
Kenny, Jimmy
Mark, Danielle & Eric...
I
Conspicuous, black
spine-like projections on keel
marked orange circles
II
Yellow-orange plastron
semicircular markings
elongating claws
III
Poorly-known habits
yellow neck stripes behind eyes
following scute seams
IV
Nesting on sandbars
narrow-channeled, fast-moving
passed brush snags logjams
V
Powerful paddling
swimming in rapid currents
basking on mud flats...
by Suzán Jiván, Mom
& Mom-Mom Suzán
for Rebecca, Russ
Kenny, Jimmy
Mark, Danielle & Eric...
I
Conspicuous, black
spine-like projections on keel
marked orange circles
II
Yellow-orange plastron
semicircular markings
elongating claws
III
Poorly-known habits
yellow neck stripes behind eyes
following scute seams
IV
Nesting on sandbars
narrow-channeled, fast-moving
passed brush snags logjams
V
Powerful paddling
swimming in rapid currents
basking on mud flats...
Killifishes Haiku
" Killifishes Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Bright killifishes
popular with aquarists
fresh and salt water
II
Spawn, lagoons, tide pools
distinguished from livebearers
barrier island
III
Barred with some pale spots
inserted low on body
pale blue and orange
IV
Yellowish bellies
warm desert pools, springs and runs
upturned pupfishes
V
Marshy backwaters
growing rather rapidly
saltier than seas
VI
Lateral series
compressed posteriorly
terminal, oblique...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Bright killifishes
popular with aquarists
fresh and salt water
II
Spawn, lagoons, tide pools
distinguished from livebearers
barrier island
III
Barred with some pale spots
inserted low on body
pale blue and orange
IV
Yellowish bellies
warm desert pools, springs and runs
upturned pupfishes
V
Marshy backwaters
growing rather rapidly
saltier than seas
VI
Lateral series
compressed posteriorly
terminal, oblique...
Thursday, June 7, 2012
Stargazing Minnow Haiku
" Stargazing Minnow Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Dusky caudal spot
in riffles over gravel
moderate to swift
II
Mid-lateral stripe
long, rounded mouth, sucker-like
eyes on upper side
III
Above upper lip
origin of caudal fin
silt intolerant...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Dusky caudal spot
in riffles over gravel
moderate to swift
II
Mid-lateral stripe
long, rounded mouth, sucker-like
eyes on upper side
III
Above upper lip
origin of caudal fin
silt intolerant...
Wednesday, June 6, 2012
Geological Haiku
" Geological Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Mostly intrusive
glacially polished, rock-hard
deeply eroded
II
Faulted and folded
occurring in creased regions
scale, rock and hammer
III
Stands of the older
partially metamorphosed
tilted deposits
IV
Many minor faults
several major, silted clay
increasing hardness
V
Varying degrees
most violently folded
iron formation
VI
Ice cap melted back
probably causing rifts, cracks
terrestrial patch
VII
Mid-continent zone
depositions in oceans
offset, strike, slip, fault
VIII
Local episodes
rifting in erogeny
molten lava flows
IX
The basin pinches
interbedded with basalt
distant sills dipping
X
Cliff vicinities
eroded edge, either end
quartzite facing west
XI
Quarry area
metasedimentary
beyond the lava
XII
Sank to the bottom
gorges causing waterfalls
outwashed folded back...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Mostly intrusive
glacially polished, rock-hard
deeply eroded
II
Faulted and folded
occurring in creased regions
scale, rock and hammer
III
Stands of the older
partially metamorphosed
tilted deposits
IV
Many minor faults
several major, silted clay
increasing hardness
V
Varying degrees
most violently folded
iron formation
VI
Ice cap melted back
probably causing rifts, cracks
terrestrial patch
VII
Mid-continent zone
depositions in oceans
offset, strike, slip, fault
VIII
Local episodes
rifting in erogeny
molten lava flows
IX
The basin pinches
interbedded with basalt
distant sills dipping
X
Cliff vicinities
eroded edge, either end
quartzite facing west
XI
Quarry area
metasedimentary
beyond the lava
XII
Sank to the bottom
gorges causing waterfalls
outwashed folded back...
Relief Haiku
" Relief Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Valley floor, hilltop
trending northeast and southeast
modified by faults
II
Resistant limestone
like a continuation
remnants of relief
III
As the latter half
causing ridges, erosion
completed series...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Valley floor, hilltop
trending northeast and southeast
modified by faults
II
Resistant limestone
like a continuation
remnants of relief
III
As the latter half
causing ridges, erosion
completed series...
Monday, June 4, 2012
Whipsawed Haiku
" Whipsawed Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Veined streaks of anger
pummeling syncopations
deigned unclaimed airwaves
II
Political rage
galloping harrowingly
unctuous hit-and-run
III
Whipsawed precision
in uproarious moshpits
fractious villainy
IV
Staying mad as hell
capriciously lasting, rad
glaringly mastered...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Veined streaks of anger
pummeling syncopations
deigned unclaimed airwaves
II
Political rage
galloping harrowingly
unctuous hit-and-run
III
Whipsawed precision
in uproarious moshpits
fractious villainy
IV
Staying mad as hell
capriciously lasting, rad
glaringly mastered...
Saturday, June 2, 2012
Insects' Success Haiku
" Insects' Success Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Rolled into a ball
as galleries of orders
presented like keys
II
Limbs used for walking
needing to use a hand lens
looking carefully
III
Might be the larva
or pupa of an insect
long, blind, soft body
IV
Leg-bearing segments
modified as poison fangs
immature stages
V
Hidden under wings
relatively primitive
globular body
VI
Common winglessness
oceanic, cave dwelling
flattened side-to-side
VII
Eyes small or absent
legs modified to grip host
biting parasites
VIII
Ventral projections
can jump well, eyes touching, humped
blood sucking in nests
IX
Lives in colonies
often with constricted waists
can be seen stinging
X
Long, sticklike body
widely separated legs
remain motionless
XI
Squat body, humped back
from the front, large, bulbous head
bulging reduced eyes
XII
Short tube underhead
elongating, forming beaks
coiling proboscis
XIII
Wings covered with scales
joined by tiny hooks or hairs
toughened wing cases
XIV
Wings of equal size
joined in flight by triangles
thoracic, backward
XV
Threadlike antennae
wings held together, roof-like
over bulging eyes
XVI
Lacewings and allies
netlike wings, many cross veins
reddish shiny eyes
XVII
Attracted to lights
stalked eggs on vegetation
pupate in cocoons
XVIII
Taking to the air
into far greater ranges
highly successful...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Rolled into a ball
as galleries of orders
presented like keys
II
Limbs used for walking
needing to use a hand lens
looking carefully
III
Might be the larva
or pupa of an insect
long, blind, soft body
IV
Leg-bearing segments
modified as poison fangs
immature stages
V
Hidden under wings
relatively primitive
globular body
VI
Common winglessness
oceanic, cave dwelling
flattened side-to-side
VII
Eyes small or absent
legs modified to grip host
biting parasites
VIII
Ventral projections
can jump well, eyes touching, humped
blood sucking in nests
IX
Lives in colonies
often with constricted waists
can be seen stinging
X
Long, sticklike body
widely separated legs
remain motionless
XI
Squat body, humped back
from the front, large, bulbous head
bulging reduced eyes
XII
Short tube underhead
elongating, forming beaks
coiling proboscis
XIII
Wings covered with scales
joined by tiny hooks or hairs
toughened wing cases
XIV
Wings of equal size
joined in flight by triangles
thoracic, backward
XV
Threadlike antennae
wings held together, roof-like
over bulging eyes
XVI
Lacewings and allies
netlike wings, many cross veins
reddish shiny eyes
XVII
Attracted to lights
stalked eggs on vegetation
pupate in cocoons
XVIII
Taking to the air
into far greater ranges
highly successful...
Friday, June 1, 2012
Rock Crawler Haiku
" Rock Crawler Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
May be dense or sparse
at extreme high altitudes
eating torpid prey...
by Suzán Jiván
May be dense or sparse
at extreme high altitudes
eating torpid prey...
Vireo Haiku
" Vireo Haiku "
by Suzán Jiván
I
Lives in a new world
in the treetops to be heard
incessant singing
II
Name, meaning, "green bird"
upper canopies of trees
sung understories
III
Fluttering of wings
before leaves come out fully
hanging hammock-like
IV
Silky fastenings
migratory fashionings
stylized posturings
V
Couplets beginning
yellowish eyerings, white eyes
exclusivity
VI
Weaving side-to-side
survival, parasitize
incubated eggs
VII
Drab, grayish olive
faint, pale stripe above the eye
undistinguishing
VIII
Greenish leaf-matching
broken phraseology
nix vicinities
IX
Forested settings
within inches of the trunk
neat cups out of bark
X
Name notwithstanding
punctured, pitched out, lower down
brown-headed cowbird...
by Suzán Jiván
I
Lives in a new world
in the treetops to be heard
incessant singing
II
Name, meaning, "green bird"
upper canopies of trees
sung understories
III
Fluttering of wings
before leaves come out fully
hanging hammock-like
IV
Silky fastenings
migratory fashionings
stylized posturings
V
Couplets beginning
yellowish eyerings, white eyes
exclusivity
VI
Weaving side-to-side
survival, parasitize
incubated eggs
VII
Drab, grayish olive
faint, pale stripe above the eye
undistinguishing
VIII
Greenish leaf-matching
broken phraseology
nix vicinities
IX
Forested settings
within inches of the trunk
neat cups out of bark
X
Name notwithstanding
punctured, pitched out, lower down
brown-headed cowbird...
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